hello! can you guys listen to my first song and help me understand what to do to get better?

no way osamaosn ain’t see this hit a Mill he has to drop this

fried

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Osamason - Class (Prod. Wise) [DJ BANNED + DJ PHAT + DJGREN8DE]

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