The introduction is too long and this is all over the place but next time I will definitely try to talk more clearly and figure out my ideas I want to speak about better and use the time span I have more wisely. 

IOC #1 The American Embassy- Jovia Smith

I definitely went over the time limit by a large amount. Next time I will make sure to stay within the time maximum that we have as well as practice on making sure not to pause whilst I am speaking. 

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