I feel the vox could be a bit brighter here and still feel sufficiently moody

i think if this is just an opener i think it could just end at the end of the vocal verse

you could take out the BWAH during the vocals completely so when it comes back in it has more impact

i think there could be more complimentary melodic elements to the vocals during this section. the vocals should be the focus here it sounds like

Overall the track is a bit dark. The aggressive bass bits are bright enough but everything surrounding is a bit dark.

Master or bass/sub bus could use a highpass around 18-20hz.

Overall, vox could come through a bit more.

Cool sounds and vibe going on in this track overall. Definitely could work as a set opener.

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