This is all new to me, so I hope I did at least an adequate job! Just wondering:  How well does the accompaniment in measures 29 through 30 fit well with the melody and bassline? What about the bassline in measures 37 through 40? Is it too choppy? I welcome all honest critiques about the entire composition. There may be areas that I didn't do so well on and if noticed, please point them out to me so I'll be able to get better & better at my craft. Thanks! Enjoy!

Brantley Alvin Final Rough Mix

PHEW! Okay, I titled it this time. I call it, "Finally" because I'm finally done with it! I'm still open to all constructive criticisms. I do hope all the changes I made are noticeable and the score is better to your ears this time around. Enjoy!

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