Hey guys! So I'm trying to do a thing where I meld in Jonathan's song (about Mira) with Luisa's song (about Jon) so I took what I had done with Luisa and tried to fit in a verse of Jon's... tell me what you think! Is it too confusing having them sing different things at the same time, or is it just enough to keep things interesting? (Yes, "Jon" is my voice digitally altered to sound like a tenor... problem? I kept the second half without Jon's part so you can compare what it would sound like without him.

Broken Heart (Act 1 Sc 4 Replacement) With Jon Part

A song for a musical I've had in my head for a while.

Your Love Song

DISCLAIMER: I'm not a singer. I'm not even really a composer. So forgive me. :P
This is a song written for Act 1 Scene 4 of my current project-- Speedo: The Musical. In this scene, one character, Jon, sings about his unrequited love for Mirabella, the most popular girl in school. After he exits, Luisa (a nerd) reprises the song, about her unrequited love for (you guessed it) Jon. This is a portion of that song. Haven't finished the whole thing yet, so I don't know what the rest will be like, nor do I know which character will be singing this portion. But I would love to hear your thoughts on it anyhow!

LYRICS:
So you can have my broken heart.
If you want it, baby, it's yours.
But if you hate the state it's in,
I'm not to blame.

I know you know; you played your part...
So don't be surprised when you see the scars.
I see in your eyes, you've recognized...
It's your name.

Broken Heart (Speedo Act 1 Sc 4 Option)

Hey there! This is my SoundCloud, which I intend to use mostly for uploading my works-in-progress to get feedback from y'all! :) Hope you enjoy. ^_^

Amy Strauss

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