Liking your sounds, what I would recommend is to spend more time mastering the percussion and vocals. The hi hat could be crisper

Cool flow. Are you using a screen over the mic? Sounds like you are to close to the mic.

Flow is proper and the lyrical game is tight to.

You should think about standing a bit further back from the mic with an aggressive style, it might help clear the recording up a bit.

Great vocal work, but the beat itself seems a bit separated.

Instrumental by https://soundcloud.com/robbie313

Lyrics:
It's a house trained cat/still here to bring back
The vibe that snuck round/the alley during the boom bap
No click clack/or pitter patter/or brat brat
Beretta acapella/so we holier than chedder

Like a swiss guard armed/with tongue and tight charm
Sellin dope to the pope/till we closer to God
We closer to alms/we closer than Brahms
and Back and Beethoven/to beatin the beat on

So fuck that molly/pop that body
Told you suckers twice/that I rep that bohdi
But a wise man said/that to break that bread
Gotta break some bones/sayin see em back in Cali

I'm out in my field/I'm livin life real
I'm honing my skills/for me and not bills
For me and my fam/for us and our clan
That includes you too/you fool that I panned

Cause you all about the glam/all about the glitter
Got a real big ego/cause you got your own twitter
And a couple chicks lettin you/flicker around her clitter
Is you even really livin?/Think you gotta think bigger

Despite the rollex/and all the good sex
You find yourself starin/and thinkin "Well what's next"?
What an age old tale/and one I confess
I can't really recall/so please, just hit next

Gettin existential/swervin through your mental
Livin life in the fast lane/cause it's only a rental
So forget the dentals/we set our own records
Finna sell my birthright/for some mighty good lentils

Cause I'm not a prophet/was never chosen
Not here to profit/like you fuckin posers
You rap to stack/while I rhyme to shine
You suck for dough/while I spit my lines

You drown in pride/as I flow and ride
You live for you/while I die for mine
Do I got your ear?/can you hear me preach?
Holy Van Gogh/de-flower the sun with my speech

Studious

a·pex  
/ˈāpeks/
Noun
The top or highest part of something, the peak

This project is the result of a love for hip hop and a student budget; as such you can expect plenty of lyricism and low quality recordings

If you're interested in a collab feel free to message me

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