Great line: why do you lie when you're down!!! So much in that.  Dig the vibe of this one overall.  Could listen to that chorus all day! :)

I love the chorus, great melodic rhythm to suit the prompt!

WHOAH that vocal is stunning, hit me immediately.  you CRUSHED this vocal performance.  beautiful.  this is a really magnetic, catchy tune to boot, and that title line really is super clever and witty and I'd build a song around it too if I came up with it.  so so so so so well done here top to bottom.  did I mention how stunning the vocal performance is?  LOL.  I mean wow.

Please stay in. Sing a user manual, whatever; I'd like to hear you sing melodies like that. Yep, catchy as hell. Thanks for sharing!

Lyrics:

For all intents and purposes
I'm still figuring out the truth
For all intents and purposes 
I dont understand you

Why do you lie when you're down (X4)

For all intents and purposes 
I just wanted to help
For all intents and purposes
You put me through hell

Why do you lie when you're down (x4)

For all intents and purposes
I think we better part ways
For all intents and purposes
I wish you better days but 

I don't lie when I'm down (x4)

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