Cute melody! Definitely strong enough to support some heavier lyrics. Very nice.

If the last thing he heard was your wonderful voice, then he died a HAPPY man..... norman

Love ballads with a great story ---------- fun, and they make me smile ----- a bit sad at the end - --------------------------------------Larry

You have a real knack for getting to the guts of things. And you have a great voice. So glad I found this!

Hope its not a true story? Great song though with emotive lyrics

Er... Can I be the first to say this brought a tear to my eye? Loved the way you combined frivolity and melody here. Great job.

This was inspired by a short story I wrote a few months ago. It's pretty depressing.

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