maybe add a little sidechain on the vocals, too, so everything glues nicely together with the kick, you feel me? also try adding little vocal bridges (think riff raff, listen to a track of him, he makes crazy ones)

You have a cool flow and nice lyrics, but your adlibs/dub track are to loud below your vocals. There are times where it can ruin the mental picture you are trying to make.

Cool accent and the lyrics were on point. The beat was a great deep sound but could have had a better all around mix on the track. Maybe get a better mic. Keep it up man. you got talent.

Dope production on this. I like the bass on this. Very deep and dark. Sick work on the synth choices as well. Lyrics are dope and flow well but I would say make them louder a bit. Work on some of the EQing on the vocals as well, other than that sick work.

The idea was to get this up and edit with your feedback which has been helpful folks thanks

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yea this is sick and grimmy and I like it.. #PanderBare

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THIS IS MY VIEW ON THE TRACK-I WROTE THE TRACK YEARS AGO AND LOST THE RAW COPY - THIS IS A REMAKE AND SLIGHTLY DIFFERENT FROM THE ORIGINAL 

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