Nice track Bevan, good melody and relevant lyrics both present here. [via https://sc.repostexchange.com]

it sounds quite decently mixed in general

Nice lyrical concept. Love the instrumentation. Organ really holds it together. Wonderful performance.

Nice vintage vibes. However the drum hihat/ride pattern is a bit choppy, try something more fluid. Good job overall

Verse 1
Did you contemplate something that exists in a dream
Where the grey matter swirls percolates & it seeps
Trapped in the void between awake & asleep
All of your thoughts are bursting out at the seams

Chorus
The singer sings a song
So you can carry on
Dreams are never gone
The singer sings a song

Verse 2
Pleasure a nation or vanquish a foe
Leave for a lifetime but you can’t let it go
Don’t bow to the judgement it’s our lives on our sleeve
Each scar on our psyche is a line for next week
Melodic answers to the question of time
Sporadic failures that lead to a rhyme

Chorus Repeat

Bridge
Sing it so loud
Sing it so clear
The doors always open for love to appear

Verse 3
Tired of normal your heart beats at will
A small bit of mystery determines the thrill
Open your mouth it’s like the sunshine comes out
Hope fills our hearts & the heavens rain down

Chorus Repeat

Outro
Inspiration,Dedication
Sprinkled with humor,Determination

Exhausting The Muse

The Singer

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