The title of my composition is what’s up?  It’s written in D minor. It has two verses, a chorus and a bridge. The progression of the verse is I-IV-I-IV-I-IV-VI-V. The progression of the chorus is IV-I-V-VI-IV-I-V (D minor natural). The progression of the bridge is IV-VII-V-I-IV-VII-V-I. (D minor harmonic)
Questions

-Is the acoustic guitar too syncopated?

-Did the strings come in too early?

- Does the melody of the verse follow the harmony rules?






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Hello!
With reference to the comments of my classmates, I add a bit more dynamic expression (crescendo, descendo) in my intro and chorus. I believe I note down the melody first instead of the chord progression this will help me keep good track of the music. Thanks to you guys and good luck!





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