This is a quick demo recorded 6/11/23 of a song i wrote on 6/10/23 (quick turnaround!). This is by no means finished-- I'm putting it online in hopes people will listen and give me feedback. Some of the stuff is just me experimenting/trying out ideas and isn't going to remain in the song (the guitar break after the bridge, for example). Mainly I'd love to hear what people think of the lyrics and whether they're original or sound too much like any other songs-- I went for the "obvious" rhyme in several spots and since I'm not very familiar with any contemporary Christian music (I like old hymns, gospel, and Ralph Stanley), I might be unintentionally copying something. Lastly, it's probably pretty obvious I'm in over my head trying to do the vocals, so if anyone out there is a really good singer, contact me so I can talk you into taking over for me when I record the song for real later this summer! :)

bloo jaye