Hello everyone, thank you for taking the time to check out a track I am working on.  Currently I am looking for tons of constructive criticism; I am going to take a break from working on this song for a bit and move onto something else.  When I come back to it I would LOVE to make several changes after digesting everyone's input.  Please do not hold back, the only way you could disrespect me is by saying the song is good how it is.  I'm looking for the smallest details all the way form EQing, instrument selection, arrangement and so on.  Once again thank you for taking the time to check out my tune and I am looking forward to posting more music as in the near future.  Enjoy! 

bobbytisher