Just posted my first song and im looking for some feedback! A visit would be greatly appreciated

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MIAMI DRIVE

LOVE REST 1

Video here: https://youtu.be/Z7hKIVu13og

The amount of support I've been getting for these tracks in the EP has been unreal and it makes me very happy that I can put these very personal songs out there for you all to enjoy and relate to. At the end of the day, that's what keepitinside is about. 

I am going to be putting these songs up on bandcamp for y'all to purchase so you can support my goal to pursue music full time.

Track #3:

when i'm alone.

[art] by Ilse Tse 
contact ilsetse@gmail.com for any inquiries

[lyrics]
oh how i tried
to think about how i messed up this time
and all i see
the worst things always come back to me

if i hold it all together
i can barely make it through
so keep it all together
maybe for me
maybe for you

close in the spaces
i chose to switch faces
and the light can be harsh
for my hopeless heart

if i hold it all together
i can barely make it through
so keep it all together
maybe for me
maybe for you
i'll do it for you

VIDEO

safe in my bathtub

first time mixing vocals, hope you guys enjoy :)

feat. RYCE
https://soundcloud.com/noeldac
mixed by me
mastered by me

cover art by https://twitter.com/stkales

Stop That

Stop That (feat. RYCE)

full album (check it out!): https://soundcloud.com/realfarley/sets/by-all-means
lyrics: https://genius.com/farley-good-afternoon-lyrics
producer: @masked-man-peace

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lyrics:
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[verse 1:]
said i been in and outta sleep for like an hour or ten
and now it's noon again, meaning i been doin' this since 2 am
and birds are chirping outside, but that don't put me in a good mood
you musta got me misconstrued

every time i tried to wake, i think i just hit snooze
bells ringing like i'm hearing christmas tunes
if the president had called, i woulda missed it too
got a message and my phone says it's from kristin -- who?

i swear it feels like someone threw a brick at my head
and i'm either feelin' really sick or feelin' back from the dead
i'm lookin' for my clothes but i'm only seeing one sock
taste up in my mouth like i been fucking eating sunblock, well

that's word to howie, now we just gotta assess
had a mental conversation saying "i gotta drink less"
i'm living life like marty huggins, get your brooms 'cause it's a mess
but at the end of the day, is when we feelin' the best

[chorus:]
good afternoon, to all of you people
sorry about that shit i said last night
good afternoon, today's a new day
let's do it again, let’s do it right

good afternoon, to all of you people
sorry about that shit i said last night
good afternoon, today's a new day
and let's do it again, and let’s do it right

[verse 2:]
and i didn't puke, yet, think i got, strep
off the couch, step, let's reset
time to, shake it off like the singer chick that 'ye put on
cookin' eggs, and i'm whippin' with an apron on

and in the back of the lawn, there's people playin' some pong
no better medicine than hair of the dog
next up on the table and my aiming game is crazy
i'm strokin' every shot just like i'm tracy mcgrady

or gary payton, vintage jason terry, peja stojakovic
pourin' shots at only 1 o'clock, it's almost a problem
should proally stop it, but it's not an option, already started
to give the liver a break, we get some bacon at sarkis

and now we thriving, uber driver sighing
'cause i'm askin' stupid shit like "yo, how long've you been driving?"
and when the sun is going down, you know the drill
let's do this shit again, like we punxsutawney phil

good afternoon

sierra

Sky.High - Its just a blur

Thank you for 1K followers! This song is out in Spotify/Apple music too! 

Producer: https://soundcloud.com/mondayat7am
Rapper: https://soundcloud.com/kyaruok
Singer/Artwork: https://soundcloud.com/ocoenia

Lyrics:
Run it down, where'd my mind go
Done it now, where'd the time go
Picking petals off of daisies
Going ghost like uh Patrick Swayze 
Then I kinda read some useless headline
Then I need to meet a stupid deadline
Asking what's life without a purpose
So I've grasped it's dying inside and on the surface 

What's a friend if they can't talk to you
What's an end if you can't start anew
What's a goal if you can't follow through
What's a soul if you can't follow you 

Maybe I've been tripping because 
I don't really know what my purpose is
It feels like I'm drowning I’ve been going with currents
So it don't seem like I'm hurting
But In reality it hurts more when the dreams reoccurring
I’ve been sleeping where the serpents live, they can wake me up
Worthless, let me drink out of the devil's cup  
I’ve been going in circles until my head erupts
And maybe that makes me crazy but maybe it's not enough
 
What’s the good of a soul if it’s not in use 
What’s the good of a soul if you’re in a noose 
But a soul's a soul no matter how battered or bruised 
Beaten down and broken or confused 

And then I find myself yelling for you one last time
Tell me it’ll be fine
One more time

Spotify

What's a Soul Ft. Kyaru & Ocoenia (Prod. Mon-Day)

hope you guys enjoy (: and plez go follow my IG@nilows.lofi

Pinky orchid

hey! i love you :) <33

Lyrics:

I would keep the tides in tune
If you would keep these flowers in bloom
I just know that gravity would bring me back to you.
You say you love me more than that stars,
But I would travel to Jupiter, Venus, and Mars
Cause I'm addicted to all of your charms.
Like Hades and Persephone, nothing would ever beat you and me,
you somehow always manage to take my breath away.

I know it's a little cliche but I mean it whenever I say:
I love you, I really do, I don't mean it to anyone else but you.
Mmm x2

Your smile is warm and bright like the sun
I can't help but to think of anyone but you,
Cause you're always on my mind.
Your voice is comforting like the rain, I can't help but to feel this way.
I hate that you live more than 2,000 miles away.
I'd take a rocket ship just to see you face to face.

And I know it's a little cliche but I mean it whenever I say:
I love you, I really do, I don't mean it to anyone else but you.
Mmm x2

What I would give to drown in your scent.
I don't usually live in too many regrets.
What I would give to hear your voice whisper in my ear.
God, I wish you were just right here.

And I am head over heels for you.
And I am head over heels for you, it's true.
And I am head over heels for you.
And I am head over heels for you.

And I know it's a little cliche but I mean it whenever I say:
I love you, I really do, I don't mean it to anyone else but you.
Mmm x4

Sky.High - Its just a blur

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