nice mystical sort of drifting/sad melody ...like the last verse especially

I just listened to some of your songs and I enjoyed them. I feel like you can improve your vocal mixing. Maybe be a bit more confident with the lower end of your voice, it sounds a bit thin and tinny in most of the songs I listened to. Tad of warmth could help. Nice work, cheers :)

Absolutely beautiful song! Your music is always so uplifting and inspiring, brother! Please keep it up! 🍀

Really great oldies sound, it's refreshing  real, and timeless... just pure talent and passion, nicely done man👏🏻

I love this wonderful song. Perfect job!!

How far have i gone 
What is this road i’m on
That leads so far from home

Are you here with me now, 
Now that i need you, No, 
i lost you long ago

And I’m barely hanging on 
I need to find the way today
And darling, I miss you so
just give me a sign and lead the way

If it’s the last thing i do I’m coming home to you
back where i belong
I’ll find the way No matter what it takes
down this road so long
You don’t know what’s here till it's gone

In some other life, Or maybe a distant dream,
that i don’t quite recall
But I close my eyes, and i’m there it seems
where you and I had it all

The sound of the children play
And the dogs out in the yard  
The fragrant flowers bloom away
It all seems so near and yet so far

If It's The Last Thing I Do

Thank you for taking the time to listen,  please 'like' my work if you are so inclined, and please comment, I do this by myself, so I appreciate all feedback..
It goes without saying, but no AI or Music Maker here, I'm responsible for every chord, melody and word, mix and master, for better or worse! (I do use VST's and samples)

Thank you all for listening and your incredible comments, I appreciate them all

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