"Stronger" remix  at A couch in WA

This is the first track I've ever recorded by myself, so I apologize for the lacking quality, I'm still learning.  Thanks for listening! 

LYRICS : 

Verse 1 :

im feeling angered at the youth, the path that we follow
the image we strive for, the lies that we swallow,
the industry controls the minds that are hollow
while those that think for themselves are now societies sorrow
the revolution is near, we are approaching the time,
lets leave the old way behind, for revolution of mind,
lets press forward towards our evolution, divine,
write the books, make the movies, play the music and shine,
but let us all remember, that we cant press rewind,
and there's no fast forward towards a future you'll find,
you only got one moment to use as your prime,
and when its gone, theres no crossing back over the line
your material worth, is only worth to the blind,
cuz when you pack up for heaven, you leave the bullshit behind,
all you take is your soul, and how your souls been defined,
through the actions you took, were they evil or kind?
did you pursue your ambitions, or did you leave them behind?
were you persistant at trying, or did you easily whine?
you know god made mountains just to teach us to climb?
and its ourselves holding us back from reaching the skies,
its as easy to be the person seen in your mind,
as accepting your dreams as just achievements in time
and if you work towards them daily, theres nothing else that youll find,
this is a letter to the youth, sent from the heavens, unsigned

Verse 2 :

I look out at the world and feel pity and shame
Souls trapped in the city of pain
Every day seems shitty and lame, nothings changed
So is it even a new day, or really the same?
My mind is still stable, despite what the people say
So...I'm insane for suggesting changing our evil ways? 
Earth is a place full of lessons explained one piece a day
Also a plane of deception where saints and demons play
The ego leads the way but teaches shame and preaches hate
Each estate we need to claim just feeds the pain that we create 
We debate the the meaning of existence but don't see its state 
Like tomorrow we'll still have it, if today we eat the cake
The greed inflates our need to take and keep and lie and cheat and fake
We seek a state of ease sedated by the things that seem ok 
We speculate, but wait afraid and lazed and waste the decent days 
Then scream and shake when we relate our life to our naive mistakes
Plotting out a clean escape, deceived to blame and bleed in vain 
But fail to feel the heat of flame, or sieze the scent of recent rain
We're free to change but seem restrained, detained without a need for chains 
Contained by only what's conceived in beating hearts and dreaming brains


Colin "Lucid" Severing