this whole thing is awesome. love the guitar, setting the scene and the elements you bring around here and there. nice vocal performance and effect. cool, cool track man

Really like this song Clive .. Delicate guitar and Vocals then the Distorted guitar comes in perfectly .. great track .. 

oh yeah, noise! but everything else is great as always, too ;)

thanks for the listen and support sir ;-)

Good honest angst combined with a nice chord sequence, well done.

nice one mate .. thanks for the listen sir :-)

@s2a: cool I like this mellow vibe, it suits your voice.

I'm all about the build here, and you've got a lot of great levels in this one, I really enjoy that!

god damn you have some lyrics.  ooo, i'm getting to the electric feedback part, and i like that.  kick ass.

written and performed badly by me ...

thanks for listening 

back into hiding :-)



Hang yourself

I read the signs but saw only stars and space inbetween
Every moment unravels like a scene
From a day time soap 
As I reel out the rope
Waiting for you to hang yourself

Every word is just so placed
To emphasise its bitter taste
With all the precious things left in full view
As I remember all the things you put me through
The sleepless nights
And the domestic fights

With all my things dumped on the doorstep 
How could I ever forget
That everything you always know 
And everything you do 
Was and is never your fault

As I reel out the rope
Waiting for you to hang yourself


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