There is a really nice retro vibe to this tune and your vocal tone is perfect.

Nice smooth sound with a good vocal and instrumental accompaniment.

This is really good. Excellent instrumental arrangement and production. It's got a Beatles vibe to it - at least to my ear, anyway. Your vocals sound great too.

A very nice sound you have there. A well written and sung song - well done !

thumbs up, a classic rock song, good job [via https://sc.repostexchange.com]

guy this sounds spectacular . I have enjoyed it

It's been a long time. I've taken a year off to properly learn production and you know what, it was pretty fun! Met a lot of cool fellow musicians as well.

This is a song I actually wrote for a songwriting competition at the school: we had an hour to write a song and we were giving lyrics from another song: Black Friday from Steely Dan. I actually finished the song pretty easily: took me about 15 minutes but the production was the hard part, took me sometime and a few remakes to get to this version. Enjoy!

lyrics:

Intro/ verse 1:

When Black Friday comes,
I’ll stand down by the door
And catch the grey men
When they swim back to shore

Chorus 1:

Oh but when, Black Friday comes
I’ll forget everything I’m shown
And before, we’ll find it out
I’ll be all alone

verse 2:

When Black Friday comes,
I’ll strike them down unknown
Call up my best friends
To deliver the last blow

Verse 3:

When Black Friday comes, 
I’m gonna dig myself a hole
Gonna lay down in it
‘till I satisfy my soul

Chorus 2:

Gonna let the world pass by me
See life through longing eyes that blind me
But when I lie, alone in bed
All this distress, becomes unsaid

Outro/ verse 4:

When Black Friday comes,
I’ll feel hopeless and frail
But at least I’ll see you
again

check out the YouTube version as well:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=hDMrbWN5rZ0

Black Friday

I'm a Belgian songwriter that has had a slow-burning love for music ever since I was 11. Let's just say that I heard Bohemian Rhapsody being used in a vacation advertisement, and after some searching of my own (AKA asking my mother), I found the song. The rest they say, is history.

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