you offer alot of advice but it sounds like you are not following it. imho!

https://soundcloud.com/gruvnited/sets/top-vox-project?utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing this is 10 yrs before my stroke.

Decent vocal performance; good but not great, I'd say. No offense. The mix could've been a lot better. The vocals really overwhelm the guitar and beat, when those elements should be what gets the listener's attention and draw them into the song. In other words: the guitar and beat needed to be louder to be heard, then have a vocals at volume where it's enough to make they can be heard as well. But not so loud that they take attention away from the other instruments and become the only thing that sticks out in the mix. Sorry to go off on a tangent there. Again, no offense intented to you, Finn or Ghxstty. Interesting sound, though, I'll give you that. I liked the guitar chord progression and melody. The hand claps were nice addition to the beat and were very catchy.

idk what you're saying but it sounds cool!

nice beat, flow. the vocals are not bad, it only requires more practice to nail the execution. nice work though!

I like the beat it's nice you gotta keep up the grind u going far

This is a song I made a while ago and I wanted to reupload this on Soundcloud. I tried getting the mix to sound better because well it's an old song and it needed some updating, but I only got so far, I'm not the best at mixing :)

 Eventually me and ghxstty: another Soundclouder here teamed up to finalize the mix in this one and I've gotta say: it's sounding pretty dope now

link to Ghxstty's Soundcloud profile:
https://soundcloud.com/ghxstty

You can also find this song on Youtube:
youtu.be/jFB_qZZhDhg

Jealousy:

INTRO:
After a dreadful Friday,
it's time to head forth my way
where will I go now
and what will I do,

VERSE 1:
While the fresh air of trees surrounds me
"He should be happy shouldn't he?"
whispering lies I once had fill me up
OOOHH!

INTERLUDE

VERSE 2:
sitting down, I wonder
why this peace makes me bothered
suddenly anger flows out
as I explode

CHORUS (short):
Jealousy, feeding on me
is this really all life's cracked up to be?
My loving tears, fall in a stream
is this really all life's cracked up to be?

VERSE 3:
as I look through you I see
love from you and from me
yet our worlds still remain so
spread apart
I guess I'll wait here, right now
waiting for signs of fallout
so I'll be closer once more
eternally all free

CHORUS (long):
Jealousy, feeding on me
is this really all life's cracked up to be?
My loving tears, fall in a stream
is this really all life's cracked up to be?
crawling in bed in the morning
seeing the kiss unfolding
two lips crashing 'nto each other
what I am after
Jealousy, feeding on me
is this really all life's cracked up to be?

INSTRUMENTAL BRIDGE

CHORUS (long):
Jealousy, feeding on me
is this really all life's cracked up to be?
My loving tears, fall in a stream
is this really all life's cracked up to be?
crawling in bed in the morning
seeing the kiss unfolding
two lips crashing 'nto each other
what I am after
Jealousy, feeding on me
is this really all life's cracked up to be?

outro: NOO!

Jealousy (mixing done with Ghxstty )

I'm a Belgian songwriter that has had a slow-burning love for music ever since I was 11. Let's just say that I heard Bohemian Rhapsody being used in a vacation advertisement, and after some searching of my own (AKA asking my mother), I found the song. The rest they say, is history.

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