like the interesting intervals in your melodies and how you go to the 1 to drive a point, cool composition

It's like a modern Beetles song , nice . I'm forgiven after this .

This is so bare, so open and honest. Like a black and white photo with a high powered camera lens, a portrait of a real human soul, wrinkles and all. Your harmonies are fascinating, and your lyrics are beautiful!

This song is powerful in its simultaneous simplicity and complexity. I love the lyrics and the solemn vibe.

Oh wowza! I love your voice and songs and vibe! xxx

Oh my goodness, this is gorgeous music. Melancholy, yet romantic. Easy to harmonize to (always something I enjoy), and the layers of instruments is really beautiful. Great work, Cristhopper!

In listening to this again, I'm realizing that your voice is the harmony the keys are searching for. Beautiful.

Wonderful song.  Love how the bass kicks it along

I've had this tune stuck in my head for such a long time now. Had to have another listen. The melody line on "would the sun shine if I were him" and "would I still be mine if I were him" gets me every time.

Of the sinner and his sins. Or when you wish you were a different person with different problems. 

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Forgiven

I looked for love
in places where I could get hurt
I am not ashamed

I lost my faith
in trying to make sense of it
who can now take my complains?

if I quit before the end
will I still be forgiven?

would it somehow make a difference?
would the sun shine if I were him?
would I feel that I can win at last?
would I still be mine if I were him?

I begged for love
and it never took me anywhere
roads of solitude

I was wrong
and I didn’t care enough
please wait in line to complain

if I quit before the end
will I still be forgiven?

would it somehow make a difference?
would the sun shine if I were him?
would I feel that I can win at last?
would I still be mine if I were him?

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