Snow sounds great on this one, Cristhopper! And the lyrics remind me of some of your 2019 work - "no one can help you if you don't help yourself". And way to speak against toxic masculinity so boldly. Really well done.

This is great. I can imagine it in a Broadway musical.

These lyrics <3 my goodness. And your melody, it's so Tim Burtoned-out.

Ah, this is beautiful. Agree with Joshua on this one.

it's all so well done but I especially love how interesting the piano parts feel

what a stunning chorus melody -lovely work

Loved the piano right away. The vocal melody and lyrics blended in beautifully,  though I didn't know how you would do that after hearing just the piano part. Nicely done!

Snow and Cherry are really interesting names, makes me curious.  Your vocals sound great, so clear and I like the build on "help."  The melody is so interesting.  And I love the piano ending!

The first tale of Snow and Cherry

Help yourself

i know it's hard to feel lonely
when nothing seems like it's alright
no need to keep on pretending
not this time

i know you know it's a journey
but we don't always know how far
don't let the world break your heart to pieces
not this time

no one can help you if you don't help yourself
every man can change his mind, it's alright

you know i love you to tears
that it's ok for men to cry
i know nobody has ever taught us
until now

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