Really nice work here, Crísthopper! I'm with @joshua-tanz in appreciating the sparse piano - really helps your voice pop.

oh im getting regina spektor feels on this one-great :)

Great Bossa Nova beat with the piano. Love that falsetto!!

Such a sweet tune! Lovely rhythm and melody!

I like verse structure, also the added warmth when the bass kicks in at about 44. 00. You have put in a great performance on this one.

Omg, Cristho. I really love the way you put the lyrics together 😍 it's very beautiful, I'd love to cover it sometime 🤗

I would have to describe the melody and lyrics to this one as nutrient-rich, it's like, I'm ingesting depth and value as I listen. I like the buh-buh-buhs too, it helps balance the philosophical nutrition.

I really like it when you go off-piste melodically after the second chorus - reach into your falsetto and play around

Really like the imagery to start off the song

Beautiful chord progression works really nicely with your voice. 

The seventh tale of Snow and Cherry

Not in my blood

it's early morning
sun rays are coming through my window
my soul is yearning
thoughts in my head spin round in circles

Why'd I keep on falling down
and coming back for more?
it's made me stronger
while trying to kill me all along
but giving up is not in my blood

the still of morning
gives me the courage I've been missing
I'm fooling no one
playing a game I know I can't win

Why instead of losing hope 
I'm coming back for more?
why do I bother?
not even I would claim to know
but giving up is not in my blood

it's early morning
thoughts in my head spin round in circles
I finally noticed
sun rays are coming through my window

Why in spite of feeling down 
I'm coming back for more?
it's made me stronger
bringing some comfort to my soul
but giving up is not in my blood

Giving up is not in my blood

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