You captured a really cool over all tone on this mix.. nice lyrics and lead vocal as well

I feel for this guy.  Nice lyrics and performance.

Words (and sounds) of wisdom, potentially applying to more than only the circumstance you describe.

I really like the flow and melody..great guitar solos as well..lyrics are excellent..concept of time is always interesting as are broken relationships..what do they really mean to you ..what are they worth

Can sure hear the Blues in your guitar solos and liking the down to Earth message and vocals.

Lyrics;
Be careful how you spend it
Time's worth more than gold
She's gone you can't rescind it
Can't cage what you can't hold

The chain so easily broken
At the weakest link
Now both of us are free
I don't know what to think

She is going her own way
And I am going mine
Without negotiation
Just wasn't worth her time

The ring a hollow token
Of all I hoped would be
Glad she didn't see my face
Walking away from me

Maybe it's a lucky break
I don't need to settle down
There's plenty of adventures
And new treasures to be found

The full moon slinks away
Dimmer goes the light
I slip into the darkness
And wander through the night

Be careful how you spend it
Time's worth more than gold
She's gone you can't rescind it
Can't cage what you can't hold

So heavy on your mind
Let go those memories
Find out what's ahead
Whatever was was not to be

She was going her own way
I am going mine
No negotiation
Guess it wasn't worth her time

Be careful how you spend it
Time's worth more than gold
She's gone you can't rescind it
Can't cage what you can't hold

What You Can't Hold

Dan's Shadowman has left the building ...
Enter Doomjelly, a name I carefully picked out of a hat. 
Thank you very much for listening!

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