For me, this is cinematic -- Spider-Man 2. I could hear it on a dramatic sitcom. There is still room to develop the structure of the vocals (bringing out more of a personality rather than a genre, hence the use of the term cinematic). Both songs introduce you as a capable person; you can either refine it or tweak it more.

Produced by Daniel Feels
Drums by Michael Ostuni
Additional Synths by Patrick Morrissey
Mixed by Ariel Borujow
Mastered by Ricardo Gutierrez

LYRICS:
My island is safer
With just pen and paper
No curves no thighs
No hurt no lies

Gimme a call sometime 
And you'll see how firm my resolve is
You'll find that I 
am addicted to woman

So melt you down and shoot you up in
into my arms with your voodoo doll pin
I always thought you'd be me heroin(e)
but this isn't what I was thinking

Just come over 
and you'll see how quickly I give in
You'll find that I
am addicted to woman

Invade my head every night
tell me that it's alright
set my body on fire
til I call my own heart a liar

My island is safer
With just pen and paper
No curves no thighs
No hurt no lies

Send me that SOS
and you'll see how quickly I'm drowning
You'll find that I
am addicted to woman




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