Take Me Back(Demo)

I was thinking about my last relationship and how I fucked up. I was actually trying to finish this other song I was writing but I ended looking up some chord progressions and came up with this. I ended up writing this in about 1 -3 hours i think. I need some work on the lyrics to make it flow better, and I sure don't sing that well.

“The Story”
By Edmundo Santos
Chords are :C major, A minor, D minor, and F major
Song Structure
Chord Progression 4x
Bridge
Chord Progression 4x
Bridge
Chord ProgreSsion4x
Bridge
Piano Solo
Chord Progression x 1 (Whole Notes)

Intro Chord Progression
One day in the hallway
She’s looking my way
What should I say
 I lost all my thoughts

And then she said 
“Boy what are you doing?”
I’ve noticed you staring
I can’t help but notice your smile

And that’s when she did it
This girl had me captured 
With nothing but looks 
And smiles

And that’s the story of one who failed

Chord Progression

Next night it’s hazy
With all we’ve been drinking
Too young to notice
Too young to care

He said “Girl will you listen?”
I think you’re special
Would you like to be mine?

She liked what she heard
Intrigued by his words
Nothing could go wrong now

And that’s the story of one who failed
Chord Progression Bridge

1 year has gone by,
Upsets and good deeds
One major error,
He went away from her

Now she is sickened
He was confused
Wasn’t sure this was it
Till it was all too late

Summer has come now
She had her decision
He wasn’t happy
And that’s when it all fell apart.

And that’s the story of one who failed
Piano interlude breakdown

Chord Progression Chord Pattern Slow whole notes
2 years have gone by
They tried mending
They weren’t that happy
And that’s the story of one who failed





Rough Recording of "The Story"

We are Dare I Dream! a small time band from Fresno, California playing anywhere from pop-rock to rock alternative. We are still just getting off the ground and are just experimenting for now........ So in the mean time just stay tuned for more... uhhhh... tunes!