I kind of didn't like the vocals at first but they grew on me...they do get better also...let me relisten...

I can understand if just wanna sing for the purpose of structuring the song and lyrics to your liking even if you aren't that good...that is what I would do...but I would say and emphasize that you do get better...I liked the middle and the chorus...you were decent.

@flagmanband thanks!  you've always been really supportive and offered really great feedback. you are appreciated 

Well done. A lot of power in the vocals. I put this song in my playlist. Fine changes between the parts.

Songwriting quality is definitely there! Just a bit of work on the vocals and the recording needed

We redefine our place in time. No fault. No crime. 
Our sins... justified... The graves won't lie
We trade integrity to take it over.

Freedom, unity, but you must obey. Ignore all our past and what we do. Fifty stars and ten generations. 

We claw. We bite. We break. We lie. More graves. More lives. 
The hate. The climb. Absolve. Enshrine. 
We regret... not at thing, we've taken over. 

Freedom, unity, but you must obey. Ignore all our past and what we do. Fifty stars and ten generations. 

You see, the dead can take no spoils. You would be wise to take a seat and remain silent now. 

Mentioning our indiscretions? Stepping in the wrong direction. Automated targeting. Time to heed the warnings. 
This dream comes with a price. We got the money. It's our right. Paradise... tripping on the unmarked gravestones. 

Freedom, unity, but you must obey. Ignore all our past and what we do. Stars and stripes and ten generations. Right?

10 Generations of Monsters

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