damn man the lyrical sentiment here grabbed me and pulled me in by force.  a guitar case as a "coffin".  the homage to papa.  you as the human embodiment of that guitar.  trying it all into the concept of invisible.  this is amazing dude.  absolutely worth my time man.  this is a clinic in lyricism and poetry.  bravo

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Verse 1:
Hey you don’t get so mad
Those sad songs 
Won’t make you feel betters

Walk past the poor
Open that door
You’ll enjoy those times a ‘lil more

Chorus 1:
Hey you …

Verse 2: 
And you 
Take out your trash
I bet you’ll feel so much love

Open those eyes
And look deep inside 
You’ve got plenty of support from above

Chorus 2:
Hey you …

Verse 3:
And then
You’ll be somebody’s favorite
Isn’t that what you wanted to be? 

You’ll feel that love 
On your heart it will tug
You’ll be so tired and feel so much stranger

Chorus 3:
Hey you …

Hey You v2 Demo

My Fallen Angel

[Verse 1]

if dad's old guitar could talk
I know what it would say
it's been hidden in the closet
since Papa past away
 [Verse 2]
I miss the the way it sounded
when Papa touched the strings
now it lays quiet in it's coffin
Papa's name painted on its case

[chorus]
I don't want to be invisable
I don't need my strings to shine
maybe something in the middle
where you feel I'm worth your time 

you left me in the shadows
next to your winter coat
in a closet with the door closed
guess I don't matter anymore

[bridge]
once I was a song
that we all sang along
now my strings are out of tune
and my voice is gone

[verse 3]
I lay silent in my case  
my strings are out of place
my voice is a memory
that time will erase

[chorus]
I don't want to be invisable
I don't need my strings to shine
maybe something in the middle
where you feel I'm worth your time 

you left me in the shadows
next to your winter coat
in a closet with the door closed
guess I don't matter anymore
 
 [chorus]
I don't want to be invisable
I don't need my strings to shine
maybe something in the middle
where you feel I'm worth your time 

maybe something in the middle
where you feel I'm worth your time

I Don't Want to Be Invisible

Faux 'standard' played by a faux 'band'!

Actually, it's an original piece written in the style of a standard.
Written and performed by Roger Hewett.

Roger Hewett©2021 (SOCAN)

I Don't Want to Be Invisible

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