The experimentation in this track is phenomenal.  You have a gift for experimental art form.

Ideas For Iteration Two:

Layer improvised polyrhythms underneath the soundscape.
Place large piano chords in during the breaks, light distortion, massive reverb.
Let layers reach a climax and transition into a new part.
Keep the beat prominent, allow the piano/synth layers to clash.
Possibly change tempo and tonic during the transition.
Arpeggiated embelishments in the first section during the breaks.
Allow the soundscape mix to drown out the hi-hats somewhat.
Lower the kick volume.
Make the subtle glitch movements more prominent.
Add slight melodic movement under the initial introduction to make it more interesting.
Add some drops.

A Quantum Entanglement of the Mind

Digital Artifact is a computer engineer and composer based in Kansas with a devoted interest in modular synthesis, polyrhythms, minimalist drones, and analog tape. Each song is designed to elicit a varying emotional response. Topics written about include apocalypse scenarios, philosophy of the human condition, and divine interconnectedness. Genres range from neo-classical to electronic IDM.

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