This song has great potential. You have a great voice !

Really nice tune.  Tough rhyming scheme to make work, but this flows very well.  Ben

There exist a few different versions of this track. This one is probably the most simplified, lyrically. Complete version coming on full length #4, the folk album

Lyrics:

Gone for what, no news, so lay
Your fears and pass those tears away

And would you tell me once
Once more today
Oh why'd you stay 
If your thoughts they weigh

Say we contend
You take your part
And this heart, I lend
Say then we fall...
Well, then you'd have it all

Feebly fraught with fear
A basic run of mind
But you're a different kind
Hence, why I'm inclined
To see the prize in you
A willful solo view
Perspective that I lacked
For all the stock out back

Into your last refrain
You made your stain
And you will remain
The love we had
Is happy in the past

So would ya tell me once
Once more today
Oh, why'd ya stay
When I pushed you away

And when ya tell me once
Once more today
Why'd ya stay
If your thoughts they weigh

Tell Me Once

All tracks available for free download.
Everything here is more or less demo quality, all self produced and self recorded.
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The albums are meant to be listened to from beginning to end, as complete projects. Thanks for listening!

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