God Damn It

They're wicked rough, but I'm not an expert at all. So I think it's fairly decent for what I was aiming for. The first sounds nicer in the beginning and the second sound rough through out but is more what I was aiming for I think.  I edited the lyrics before I started so if you know both the songs, you might get a better feel for what i should have been by reading the lyrics:

Blink Patrol - You could miss me


You could be happy and I won't know
But you weren't happy the day I watched you go

And all the things that I wished I had not said
Are played in loops 'till it's madness in my head

and I'm so sorry
I cannot sleep I cannot dream tonight
I need somebody and always
This sick strange darkness 
Comes creeping on so haunting every time

Is it too late to remind you how we were
But not our last days of silence, screaming, blur  

Most of what I remember makes me sure
I should have stopped you from walking out the door

(I miss you I miss you I miss you)

And as I stared I counted 
Webs from all the spiders
Catching things and eating their insides
Like indecision to call you
and hear your voice of treason
Will you come home and stop this pain tonight

You could be happy, I hope you are
(I miss you 3x)
You made me happier than I'd been by far
(I miss you 3x)

Dorothy Arroyo