Music is great, yet those lyrics are well thought out!

Creative song.  Interesting, engaging lyrics, and blossoms well with the flute-like (synth?) in the last couple of verses.

Congratulations  , your song was chosen to be spotlighted this month at r/indiemusicfeedback!   https://www.reddit.com/r/IndieMusicFeedback/comments/j3f5kc/september_spotlight_hey_guys_i_am_back_with/

I always expect your music to kick ass, refreshing change!

The guitar tab is available on my youtube channel. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OiMle7ioW20

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I think that something's going on
Back at my house
I take it back I'm never wrong
Now you mention it

Things takes a little bit longer
when you try
Things takes a little bit longer
when you try

Does it feel like it's love
Baby I don't get enough
Do you want me to pour
Even though we're at the top

She likes me when I've had enough
She likes it when I tell her "game over"
She holds me when I'm walking off
She'll let go when she senses I'm below her

I think that something's very wrong
In the come down
The stink of sweat and pheromones
Catch my throat

It stings a little bit longer
when you lie
It stings a little bit longer
when you lie

Does it feel like before
A time that we had not been born
Do you remember the war
Cause I think we might have lost

She likes me when I've had enough
She likes it when I tell her "game over"
She holds me when I'm walking off
She lets go when I tell her I'm below her
I'm below her

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