Well I, for one, think it's pretty damn good. Orchestration, backing, lead, vocal and lyric are all top notch. 

Wow, the mix is great. I love the piano and strings each instruments is distinct and interesting. Song writing at it's best. Sing man, sing!

This song was written about a conversation between me and my wife quite a few years ago. i was trying to describe to her my feelings during a very hard time. 

all piano and orchestrations were done by the one and only roon. more than one of the best orchestrators i have ever known.. also a dear friend.

its a terrible dream
like i just came home from the war
the battle in me
the one for so long i've ignored
the burn and the sting
of knowing that you truly are the victim

and where would i be?
if you hadn't put me somewhere safe
impending degree's.. 
that drove me to the edge of outer space
trying to make you see.... sitting here drawing circles.

circles on the page
pushing them away
keeping them at bay for another day
tearing at the fray
hearing what you say
and knowing that it doesnt work that way
circles on the page
trying to explain
holding back the rage
burning like a flame
trying not to go insane

(the best solo i've probably ever done backed by the best rhythm section i've ever heard .. thank you roon)

circles on the page
pushing them away
keeping them at bay for another day
tearing at the fray
hearing what you say
and knowing that it doesnt work that way
circles on the page
trying to explain
holding back the rage
burning like a flame
trying not to go insane

i hope you enjoy this. it's the single best song i think i have ever written.
please tell me what you think.


Drawing Circles featuring roon

these are just blue prints.. demo's... mix tapes.. whatever you call it.

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Kay Stoeffler

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Adifferentstrummer

Guiville

Martin Wellbourne

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