loving that dreamy atmosphere wow, this is incredible

yeah crazy and sick bro ! much love from germany ! peace

Your song's structure perfectly balances the energy of the chorus and verses

1ST DRAFT

If you looked back at the Word
to understand how it be
You’d understand what’s real
and what we call a fantasy
You’d understand
there’s a spiritual reality
No scoping to the T
I got TRUTH
 ya boy can see

Wakin’ up and getting on with it
Give it to my Father — upfront, it’s
So many things to be thankful
He’s got this
Gotta grab my phone
and check what I done missed

Just like that — like yeah, the plot twist
Now you on Instagram
scrolling for a bad bit

You was in Yah… but what happened?
It’s the algorithmic dragon

[Hook – Vice Speaking]
I got him now
I got him now
He on my feed
I’ll blind him now
I’ll show what he like,
he like ’em thick,
and I’ma gon’ hold him down

He scrolling, looking at these filtered
images like this real now
I’ll send him to a page
he can get this OnlyFans crown
Yeah, you far from Yah now
Dancing with these demons
Fancing — lust got me
feasting on this sin now

[Verse 2 – D’Vo]
Just lil’ bit ago
I was weak and I was dim
I was broke with no voice
You gave me chance
to live again

Out the door
’Bout to catch me a check
In my car, better yet
I was a mug would bet

Got another bill piling on me
And these mommas drain me
Thangs be frustrating

MAD FOR WHAT?
That thang is tucked
They say levels been up
Anger is ten
Kinda thinkin’ this is time’s up

Man, I wish somebody would
say something —
This is time’s up
I just ain’t patient
to deal with too darn much

[Hook 2 – Vice Speaking]
I’ve got him now
I’ve got him now
I’ve set up shop
settling down

I push his irrational decisions
to their heights —
that’s my role now

I weigh on the strong
Make a moment they regret
His actions cause a ripple
that will get
to hell bounds

It’s savory taste of flesh

[Verse 3 – Vice / Shift]
I’ve got a host
I do the most
Tricking all fleshed ones
Feeding me the energy
of chaos at the upmost

And there is One
I will bow to, disdained
If you say the Savior’s name
I vanish and go away

[Outro – D’Vo]
I’m mad because
this evil had a hold
on who we be
Jesus Christ
set me free
Rinse spirits off me

VISIONS OF SOLOMON

Spiritually Led & H-Tine Bred. 
www.dvothecodex.com

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