needs a little refinement but the soft chords and sweeps sound great here

tone should maybe be a little lighter/fuzzier but the added melody here really fleshes it out nicely

i really like the picking here, but agree it would probably fit better in another section

i dig the chords here too, but i think maybe the other instruments need to also "escalate" a bit to match

this type of relatively simple melodic elements fit really nicely on the chorus, i dig it

i think the picking fits waaaay better here than earlier sections

this might be the proper time to unleash the shred, i think a nice outro solo would be great here, maybe drums and bass get a little more high-energy for the last bit to match

once we dial it in, that change-up is going to sound soooooooooo good!

one play of the riff right here like this sounds fucking great. think it would be great for the two guitars to play it in unison, or harmonizing, then both pause together

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Colin Spencer

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