My first published song... I would much appreciate any kind of help and suggestions...

V1
come as you are
you’re always gonna be a superstar
with just a little smile you’ll turn all heads 
as you always did
and oh - you look beautiful tonight

C
oh I’ll see you 
the way you are tonight 
for thousand years to come 
you’ll shine and shine 
when the world is new
I will know the way you are 
‘cause you will always be a superstar

V2
go change your hair
i’ll always see it way up in the air
the wrinkles around your eyes will never show
I’ll just never know
you’re magic knows no time

Superstar (Original)

V1
Boy don’t cry
I’m sure I will be here for a long time
Don’t be afraid 
‘Cause fear will only steal your smile away

C
If you cry tonight 
I will hold you tight
And I’ll place a little light
Right inside your heart
So you know - there’s a place - that we share 
And you’ll always find me there

V2
Don’t be ashamed 
Your tears show us that your soul is kind 
Don’t run away 
We only grow together if you stay

V3
Don’t be upset 
Sometimes being sad is time well spent
Don’t be fooled 
There is no other way than going through

Don‘t Cry (Original)

Hi...

I would love to get some feedback on any aspect (songwriting, vocals, instrumentation, recording, mixing, ...). If anyone is interested to share experiences along this way, this would be great! Thank you!

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