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Chamile

Chamile (prod. Isolated)

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Lyrics:

Sitting up late night tryna hit your line
Worried bout seeing if youre doin fine
Watch your story, bite my lips, try to stop cryin
guess your new man is taking all your time

Seems like im the one whos really not okay
I sit and dream let my mind replay all those days
I feel like you dont even care about those memories
Havent touched the door or left my room in 7 days

I try to drown my sorrows with so much fucking henny
All because she done found herself a brand new honey
Is it all because he making so much fucking money
Or is it all because she never even fucking loved me

Poppin pills, whats her deal, make me numb my brain
I know one day this gon catch up, know its not okay
But why she playin with my heart like its a fucking game
Death is knocking on the door, hes here for me today

Wanna run away to a place that i used to call home
Just to find out that you packed up and you moving on
While I sit here with a couple of tears and i make this song
Do you think that this is fair that you get to move on

Ache

Ache (prod. by autrioly)

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Lyrics:

Look her in the eyes, watch the blood drip down
Watch her cry, see her knees drop and hit the ground 
Im sorry, i could never help, so don’t you cry
Grab my semi, say goodbye, I’m aiming right between your eyes

Bury yo body 6 feet deep
Put a cross on the top, so you stay underneath me
Yeah she comin for my soul, promise you dont faze me
Im dancin with the devil on the daily, yeah im just as crazy
 
Suicide on my mind all the time 
While im poppin all these percs and im sippin on my lean and wine
Better watch your self and watch the mines cuz this my time to shine
Hear a whisper from my demon, saying i should end your life

Hellgirl, I’m your hellboy
Use me like I’m your toy
Ill use you like you’re my toy
Lets use each other so we can both enjoy

Hellboy, I’m your hellgirl
Ill use you like you’re my toy
Use me like I’m your toy
Lets use each other so we can both enjoy

One hand on the wheel, the other grippin your thigh
Grab the stick and i shift, now we liftin and fly
Say she love me, this the most that she been feelin alive
Doing 90 over 30, bitch be ready to die

Bury yo body 6 feet deep
Put a cross on the top, so you stay underneath me
Claimin she a spawn, triple six will never faze me
Dancin with the devil, yeah she know im just as crazy

Hellgirl, I’m your hellboy
Use me like I’m your toy
Ill use you like you’re my toy
Lets use each other so we can both enjoy

Hellboy, I’m your hellgirl
Ill use you like you’re my toy
Use me like I’m your toy
Lets use each other so we can both enjoy

Hellboy (prod. by metlast)

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Lyrics:
i dont know how to feel
i dont know how to deal
i dont know if its real
i cant tell if its real
snow white, that's the name of my love
snow white, no i cant get enough
all night, and im luvin the snow
all white, and im luvin the snow
snow white, its the name of my drug, the name of my love
snow white, I know she a drug, I jus cant get enough
all night, and im luvin the snow
all white, I got coke in my nose
not to mention, my prescriptions, keep on liftin, my serotonin
see me feenin, fuck how im feelin, are you leavin, are you leavin
not to mention, my prescriptions, keep on liftin, my serotonin
is this fiction, fuck how im feelin, am i dreamin, am i dreamin
cuz i dont know how to feel
i dont know how to deal
cuz i dont know if its real
i cant tell if its real
snow white, that's the name of my love
snow white, no i cant get enough
all night, and im luvin the snow
all white, and im luvin the snow
snow white, its the name of my drug, the name of my love
snow white, I know she a drug, I jus cant get enough
all night, and im luvin the snow
all white, I got coke in my nose

Snow White (prod.flower x @luffysome)

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mix the cough syrup with the codeine
never been alright ever since seventeen
got some shit on my chest that I just wanna scream
on the day that i die, will you remember me, cuz I
I wanna see if I can live forever way past the mic, take my life tonight, tell me
tell me would you even cry tonight, you know im not alright, im fighting for my life
I wanna see if I can live forever way past my time, pop these percs tonight, tell me
tell me would you even cry tonight, you know im not alright, im fighting every single fucking night
so much running through my fucking mind
I just really wanna talk to you again
but I understand that it all must end
love story cliches, who would've thought that this would end
I swear I didn't uh, I swear I didn't know
I wish you didn't uh, I wish you didn't go
I wish we would've uh, I wish we would've known
you're the only thing on my mind when I'm feeling kind of alone
im just a lonely boy, tryna find my way
in a world that's always changin
im just a lonely boy, tryna find my place 
in a world that's always spinnin
caught up in a cycle of pain
I'm tryna break free, but it's all in vain 
tryna find a different way that I can cope but
it's kinda hard when you're stuck inside my brain
I wanna see if I can live forever way past the mic, take my life tonight, tell me
tell me would you even cry tonight, you know im not alright, im fighting for my life
I wanna see if I can live forever way past my time, pop these percs tonight, tell me
tell me would you even cry tonight, you know im not alright, im fighting every single fucking night
I'm just a wasted youth, tryna find my way
living fast, but im dying slow every day
im trying find my way around in this dark place
but its hard to see with all these tears in my face
I'm just a wasted youth, tryna find my way
living fast, but im dying slow every day
I cant shake this feeling, needa medicate
the only thing that alleviate tha pain

Tonight

Tonight (prod. The Ushanka Boy)

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Lyrics:
wipe ur pretty little eyes and dont u cry
im sorry when i say that I wanna die
i cant help the way i really feel inside
feel inside, feel inside
wipe ur pretty little eyes and dont u cry
I promise everything is gon be alright
i cant help the way i really feel inside
feel inside, feel inside
I still see ur face in every single crowd
Swear I hear ur voice in every single sound
I thought we had forever, but forever's gone
now im stuck sitting here with all these memories
Another one gone, another heartache
Can't escape the pain, it's way too much to take
The typa love we had, it just really couldn't survive
Now I'm left with nothing, all except a broken life
so I'm all alone, down a lonely road
i got my blow, only thing by my side
know im all alone, down this lonely road
please dont hit my phone, I think I'd rather die
so I'm all alone, down a lonely road
i got my blow, only thing by my side
know im all alone, down this lonely road
please dont hit my phone, I think I'd rather die
wipe ur pretty little eyes and dont u cry
im sorry when i say that I wanna die
i cant help the way i really feel inside
feel inside, feel inside
wipe ur pretty little eyes and dont u cry
I promise everything is gon be alright
i cant help the way i really feel inside
Feel inside, feel inside

Memories (prod. by smerxh x @kazbabeats)

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Lyrics:
money on my mind, know im stuck in a trance
one day imma make, all these diamonds fucking dance
get her pussy wet, im gon make her drop her pants
alright,
money on my mind, know im stuck in a trance
one day imma make, all these diamonds fucking dance
get her pussy wet, im gon make her drop her pants
one day imma turn, all these haters into fans
money on my mind, know im stuck in a trance
one day imma make, all these diamonds fucking dance
get her pussy wet, im gon make her drop her pants
one day imma turn, all these haters into fans
never felt like enough, but i took you for granted
I regret some of my choices, but if im being honest
You were such a bitch, I fucking hate you
You were such a waste, why did I date you
but even if i had the chance, know I can't take you back
you really fucked up my heart, know I cant handle that
know there's too much on plate right now, no I can't handle that
I'd rather wallow in my sorrows while I smoke on this thrax
when I sat alone outside, i didnt need a sweater
I swear we'd always fight, but nothing ever got better
but every time we argued, swear that pussy got so wetter
and every time we fought, I swear the sex got so much better
you sayin that you hate me but I know that aint true
that's why when I tell you come over, yeah you always pull through
I know that you love this dick the way I luv ur pussy too
swear she she always chokin on this dick, make her sneeze, achoo
so im sittin alone, inside my room
and Im lookin up, staring at the moon
tell me if this bitch, is gonna be my doom
gonna be my doom, gonna be my doom
money on my mind, know im stuck in a trance
one day imma make, all these diamonds fucking dance
get her pussy wet, im gon make her drop her pants
one day imma turn, all these haters into fans
money on my mind, know im stuck in a trance
one day imma make, all these diamonds fucking dance
get her pussy wet, im gon make her drop her pants
one day imma turn, all these haters into fans
so im sittin alone, inside my room
and im lookin up, staring at the moon
tell me if this bitch, is gonna be my doom
gonna be my doom, gonna be my doom

Ex (prod. metlast x staywoozy)

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Lyrics:
moving slow, jus like tha ocean
time it pass, like they running laps
moving fast, think its just tha notion
time it pass, but Im always coming last
moving slow, just like tha ocean
money up, I stack these hunnids all in cash
but its hard, so im just smoking on my hash
before I die, Im gon live this life like its my last
i dont, want you, to feel, alone
i just, want you, to feel, alive
this is, the chance, you got, one life
i know, its hard, try and, survive
moving slow, jus like tha ocean
time it pass, like they running laps
moving fast, think its just tha notion
time it pass, but Im always coming last
moving slow, just like tha ocean
money up, I stack these hunnids all in cash
but its hard, so im just smoking on my hash
before I die, Im gon live this life like its my last

Ocean (prod. by Autrioly)

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Lyrics:
huh, always heard stories of the perfect love
always thought that it was brought to you from right above
now you feelin like youre running out of luck
feeling like you're falling down and youre stuck

dont know why i always try and open up, tho
tell you how I feel but you dont give a fuck, no
tell me where the fuck did all the love go
i knew she didnt deserve all of my trust, no

cuz love, love don't really mean shit, no
they say they love you then leave you ina ditch, tho
now you know that they didnt really mean it
now youre all alone, and you're feenin

for love, love dont really mean shit, no
i swear i thought that you was really feelin it, tho
saw you texting him, couldnt believe it
why you sayin you love me while you cheatin

huh, always heard stories of the perfect love
always thought that it was brought to you from right above
now you feelin like youre running out of luck
feeling like you're falling down and youre stuck

dont know why i always try and open up, tho
tell you how I feel but you dont give a fuck, no
tell me where the fuck did all the love go
i knew she didnt deserve all of my trust, no

cuz love, love don't really mean shit, oh
they say they love you then leave you ina ditch, tho
now you know that they didnt really mean it
now youre all alone, and you're feenin

for love, love dont really mean shit, oh
i swear i thought that you was really feelin it, tho
saw you texting him, couldnt believe it
why you sayin you love me while you cheatin

Fuck Love (prod. by @Farber & Pizzle)

Lyrics:

Verse:
You saying that you love me
You saying that you want me
But then when you get upset
You go and try to leave me

So you gon kick me out
Then you say I should've stayed
Why you messing wit my heart
Why you always playin games

Now I'm standing all alone
And I'm all up in my thoughts
You start blowin up my phone
Tellin me you wish I'd stop

Say my love just ain't enough
But I'm giving all I got
I don't wanna give you up
For your love I've always fought

Chorus:
Lemme Love
Lemme Love on You
Lemme Love
Lemme Love on You
(x2)

Bridge:
I been waitin so long
For a girl like you to love
Baby you're my new home
I treat your love like a drug

Really tryna overdose
I don't really give a fuck
Cuz your love is all I want
But baby you don't give a fuck 

Verse:
You saying that you love me
You saying that you want me
But then when you get upset
You go and try to leave me

So you gon kick me out
Then you say I should've stayed
Why you messing wit my heart
Why you always playin games

Now I'm standing all alone
And I'm all up in my thoughts
You start blowin up my phone
Tellin me you wish I'd stop

Say my love just ain't enough
But I'm giving all I got
I don't wanna give you up
For your love I've always fought

Chorus:
Lemme Love
Lemme Love on You
Lemme Love
Lemme Love on You
(x2)

Outro:
Lemme Love
Lemme Love on You
Lemme Love
Lemme Love on You
(x2)

Let Me Love On You

Let Me Love On You (prod. @ayomercy)

Chorus:
I just wanna get high
I don't wanna feel a thing
Fingers running thru the sky
Floating like I'm in dream

In the middle of the night
She tell me all her pretty lies
She say its only you and I
But she a devil in disguise

Verse:
She say she want attention
That she just want affection 
But if I don't give her any
Then she jus start stressing

She blowing up my phone
Asking me who I been textin
Im chillin on my own
But I swear that she got me stressin

My heart is getting cold
Cover up the pain wit ice
I don't wanna be alone
But you always tryna fight

Now you callin up my phone
In the middle of the night
You aint tryna be alone
She swear that she gon make it right

Chorus:
I just wanna get high
I don't wanna feel a thing
Fingers running thru the sky
Floating like I'm in dream

In the middle of the night
She tell me all her pretty lies
She say its only you and I
But she a devil in disguise

Verse:
She say she want attention
That she just want affection 
But if I don't give her any
Then she jus start stressing

She blowing up my phone
Asking me who I been textin
Im chillin on my own
But I swear that she got me stressin

My heart is getting cold
Cover up the pain wit ice
I don't wanna be alone
But you always tryna fight

Now you callin up my phone
In the middle of the night
You aint tryna be alone
She swear that she gon make it right

Pretty Lies

Pretty Lies (prod. @ayomercy x @bbs)

Intro:
Imma always be ten toes down on the ground
Cover me in your love don't give a fuck if i drown
You my lil freak and I cant wait to have you around
Imma grab you by your throat and spit inside of ya mouth

Chorus:
Tell me tha all tha love that you feel is genuine
I ain't ever gonna find a girl like you again
Sayin you ain't perfect but you know that you a ten
I jus wanna meet you over and over again

Know that I ain't perfect but swear for you that I am
Every time I close my eyes feel you touching my hand
Baby promise me that imma always be your man
Love to hear you say it over and over again

Verse:
Imma always be ten toes down on the ground
Cover me in your love don't give a fuck if i drown
You my lil freak and I cant wait to have you around
Imma grab you by your throat and spit inside of ya mouth

Really want you here but we a couple hours out
But I swear iss okay cuz baby we gon figure it out
I know that you bored alone up inside of that house
Come outside Ill pick you up know you feelin aroused

Tell me all the little things you got inside of your mind
While I sit and think about how you the fuck you so fine
I just wanna sit right here and stare right in your eyes
Being honest I cant believe that you're even all mine

Its lowkey kinda crazy knowin that we barely met online
But I knew it from the start when you were banging on my line
And you said how you fucking wit me I knew this was a sign
How someone like you exist without me, baby its a crime

Chorus:
Tell me tha all tha love that you feel is genuine
I ain't ever gonna find a girl like you again
Sayin you ain't perfect but you know that you a ten
I jus wanna meet you over and over again

Know that I ain't perfect but swear for you that I am
Ever time I close my eyes feel you touching my hand
Baby promise me that imma always be your man
Love to hear you say it over and over again

Verse:
Crazy knowin we jus met a few weeks ago
Don't know how but I know that our souls are old
Its almost like you and I been have here before
I don't wanna keep our love waiting anymore

Always talking to you never felt like a chore
Luv tha way you talk swear it makes me love you more 
Luv it when you say im the one that you adore
My heart was feeling cold but now its feeling kinda warm

You the only one for me and I'm the only for you
I know that there gon be days where we gon share separate views
But I just think that we gon have to sit and think shit through
Cuz baby you my everything and I don't wanna lose you

I been wanting you so bad, hope you been wanting me too
Brand new car straight off the lot, she hoppin up in to tha coupe
Doing ninety in a sixty baby jus how we do
Lemme take you round the city show you some of the views

Chorus:
Tell me tha all tha love that you feel is genuine
I ain't ever gonna find a girl like you again
Sayin you ain't perfect but you know that you a ten
I jus wanna meet you over and over again

Know that I ain't perfect but swear for you that I am
Every time I close my eyes feel you touching my hand
Baby promise me that imma always be your man
Love to hear you say it over and over again
(x2)

Outro:
Imma always be ten toes down on the ground
Cover me in your love don't give a fuck if i drown
You my lil freak and I cant wait to have you around
Imma grab you by your throat and spit inside of ya mouth

Over and over again
(x4)

Genuine

Genuine (prod. by @noizy)

First beat that I made on my own :) Be harsh ab anything in the song!
Lyrics down below!

Chorus:
I know you well
But its to hard tell
How far I fell
Straight down to hell

Verse:
Swear I knew it when we first met that this shit aint gonna last
Hated when I said I love you but you ain't say it back
So now you textin me and start sayin that you want me bad
Tryna lock me up again and make me feel like im trapped

Havin all this energy right now but where was all of that
When it mattered the most and I really needed you so bad
When I got my shit without a single word you was mad
But my new bitch treat me good glad that you live in my past

Chorus:
I know you well
But its to hard tell
How far I fell
Straight down to hell

Verse:
Only reason that we met is cuz I wanted to fuck
I still remember you was saying that my love ain't enough 
And when we fought, told you my feels, but you said man the fuck up
And now you say you want me back cuz you know that you fucked up

Swear you got me banging my head up against the wall
And I dont even know how far that Im bout to fall
I just seen them open up them gates wit welcoming arms
But I guess this is what I get for fucking ending it all

Chorus:
I know you well
But its to hard tell
How far I fell
Straight down to hell

Falling

Chorus
I know that I ain't tha best at what I do buh promise you
That you gon be the one for me and Im gon be the one for you
Cant believe that you here like it don't even feel true
And I swear baby no one else I met can do it like you

Love the way she move her hips like she got sumthin to prove
And you gon always be my girl, I swear that you is my boo
I was chasing my dreams for a minute now Im chasing you
And I swear baby no one else I met can do it like you

Feel my heart beat in my chest, know you loving me the best
Drivin while she give me head, park and now we havin sex
All her friends became my fans, and now they likin up my jams
Swear I love to be your man, I love it when you hold my hand

I ain't do this shit for me cuz Im just doin it for you
I just wanted you to see how much that I be lovin you
Really hope that you love me with every bit of your heart
Cuz I just want you to know that Im really lovin you too

Verse
I won't tell no lies, in the night im up my mind
And I start to question whether this is real and you're mine
But I don't wanna let them in cuz I know that they be lying
I just hope it ain't true cuz I feel my heart start to die

I know that we livin far and you a ways away
But I know in my heart that our love gon find its way
And make it into your heart, I turn to god and pray
That I get to see your face every single day

Chorus
I know that I ain't tha best at what I do buh promise you
That you gon be the one for me and Im gon be the one for you
Cant believe that you here like it don't even feel true
And I swear baby no one else I met can do it like you

Love the way she move her hips like she got sumthin to prove
And you gon always be my girl, I swear that you is my boo
I was chasing my dreams for a minute now Im chasing you
And I swear baby no one else I met can do it like you

Feel my heart beat in my chest, know you loving me the best
Drivin while she give me head, park and now we havin sex
All her friends became my fans, and now they likin up my jams
Swear I love to be your man, I love it when you hold my hand

I ain't do this shit for me cuz Im just doin it for you
I just wanted you to see how much that I be lovin you
Really hope that you love me with every bit of your heart
Cuz I just want you to know that Im really lovin you too

LOML

LOML (prod. Toxic Beats x Vertx)

If anyone wants to collab or somethin, let me know.
Artist on the rise.

Laxxy

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