First attempt at making a song! 

(Most recent updates 9/6) This is becoming a never ending edit. I can't figure out what about it isn't sitting right with me. Constructive criticism very welcome, but go easy on me! 

Better with headphones!

Part of the Hedgelings tv show project.

www.hedgelings.com

Lyrics:

There’s no more awful feeling
Than unreciprocated love
To know that when our eyes meet
My heart will never be enough

I’m all alone

But if I had a chance, I don’t think I would say

Every song I write is about you
Everytime I cry it's over you
Everytime you look me in the eyes
Everytime we try to say goodbye
Everything I write is about you

I touch this pen to paper
Cause it’s the closest I can get
To feeling like we’re touching
Sometimes it’s easier to forget

I’m all alone

But it I had a chance, I don’t think I would say

Every song I write is about you
Everytime I cry it's over you
Everytime you look me in the eyes
Everytime we try to say goodbye
Everything I write is about you

Sometimes I want to cry out
I know its not good for my health 
But I just sit in silence
Why do I do this to myself?

I'm all alone

But it I had a chance, I don’t think I would say

Every song I write is about you
Everytime I cry it's over you
Everytime you look me in the eyes
Everytime we try to say goodbye
Everything I write is about you

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