Good work, it sounds synthetic at some part of the composition, like the cello part but the composition is good. The problem is, you have a good orchestral skill but you do not have a melody on your composition. 

@harrywarden: played a few of your tracks. I'm no rap expert but you seem legit to me. Hope it goes well for you!

And he saw that was good... a good song. This is powerful stuff man. I admire this greatly.

First movement of Creation, suite for orchestra and chorus. Space echoes flat and dark, then come six consonants: yod heh yod, alef vav resh, the first words, "Let there be light." The first theme is a musical cryptogram of those Hebrew consonants. Light is separated from darkness. By the end, everything is vibrating, and light breaks forth.

In the beginning, when God created the heavens and the earth, the earth was formless and void, and darkness was over the face of the deep, and the breath of God was fluttering over the surface of the waters, then God said, "Let there be light!" and there was light.

Day 1 - Let there Be Light

I. Let there Be Light

All original compositions, mostly orchestral. I am still deciding on a style, and probably will be for a very long time.

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R.Alonso

Admiral Krank and His Mighty Band of Spacemen

Eli Evans (Composer)

Nicola Franzese

Karin-Maria Brunner

jean-pierre carpentier

Alcablast

bransonkanderson