Your answer here conveys intelligence and sensitivity.  It would be improved further with more knowledge about revenge tragedy as a genre and more focus on Shaksepeare and his craft (rather than just the characters)

This is true of revenge tragedies (rather than Shakespearean tragedies)

Good to hear specific reference integrated

Try to look more explicitly at aspects of style.  So, for example, here you could have referred to the motifs of poison and disease used in the play to build up ideas about revenge

Overall you speak in a calm, sensitive and mature way Beth so have the potential to do really well in this task.  You come across as thoughtful about the play and its issues and it's good to hear you integrating specific examples.  Now try to do this more and aim to focus more explicitly on Shakespeare's choices as a writer.

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