Very good introduction, highlights key areas and themes well

Effectively connects two motifs of the poem together, and you've also given a real life example of war which develops the point really well

This is excellently worded, as well as your use of examples to back up your statements

Maybe this would be a good place to start the presentation? (just a suggestion)

Solid point, although it could have been said a little faster (as in, we don't need that much context to get to the point)

maybe you could put a little evidence from the poem here to support this?

Kind of repetitive (just being a little critical)

Very well interpreted, you've got an excellent knowledge and understanding of the poem, perhaps a little repetition, but otherwise your structure is very good and effectively conveys your ideas

Comments

Piers

Piers

Piers

Piers

Piers

Piers

Piers

Piers