Really nice work, love the composition. Only suggestion is that I'd love to see a little more musical phrasing in your melodies; little bits of expression can really make a synth sing.

I like the birds at the start but they start getting a little distracting from the music -- which is lovely and simple

Nice accoustic bass drum to ride on. Sweet music

really nice earthy, natural vibes. for me the birds feel a bit too rigid and 'loopy' when next to the feeling of the music. really nice track.

little bit slow, and somewhat repetative. but otherwise a good track

7/4 
Sleeping in the Forest

I thought the earth remembered me,
she took me back so tenderly,
arranging her dark skirts, her pockets
full of lichens and seeds.
I slept as never before, a stone on the river bed,
nothing between me and the white fire of the stars
but my thoughts, and they floated light as moths
among the branches of the perfect trees.
All night I heard the small kingdoms
breathing around me, the insects,
and the birds who do their work in the darkness.
All night I rose and fell, as if in water,
grappling with a luminous doom. By morning
I had vanished at least a dozen times
into something better.
-Mary Oliver

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