This sounds great to my ears, Percussions and overall ambiance are top notch. The length did not bother me, but it seems to end for no reason. Cheers

I like your sound design, the sounds work very well together. This may be subjective, but to me the chords and melody seem to wander around aimlessly, which nicely fits the title/song description, but on the other hand doesn't get me hooked. Anyway, good luck in the challenge! :)

This is not bad background music for use in a game but felt a bit too long and repetitive for listening to on its own.

fantastic drums sounds and pattern. they fit perfectly in the song. also really like the atmos. some...weird notes sometimes in the melodic line(imho) but it's a overall very enjoyable and very good composition.

I'm a bit conflicted about this track. I usually get bored very quickly with repetitive or atmospheric tracks, but here the first 3:30 were over in a second, which speaks for the quality of the track :) But after about 5 minutes, it felt a little too repetitive for me. But there are also a lot of things I liked, for example: The solid percussion work. The great echo SFX. The great filter bass. Not to mention that the overall mood is top notch as well.

I like the vibe very much, but each of these sections feel like they could be a little shorter -- at least for OSC purposes.

I like the drums, the dark atmosphere created and the progression of the elements, i miss a rythmic bass in some parts

I used to feel
I used to feel bad
Bad, man
Bad, man

Reaper 6.83 
27 instances of Vaporizer
JS: Saturation x1
TDR Nova x1
A1 StereoControl x3
Transient Shaper by Kiloheartz x2
OTT x2
Fabfilter x27
TDR Kotelnikov x6
Raum x17
Supermassive Valhalla x10
Protoverb x3
master_me x4

He felt so bad he turned off his ability to feel and left earth. Elmo had had enough. 

Critical comments appreciated though of course I may not agree.

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