Name: Tell Me Everything by Erin Wolf
Duration: 1 min

I know it was intentional that you kept this short, but I would love to see this expanded. I am getting an Adele sort of vive from this. Really nicely done.

This is absolutely a hit song in the making! That melody in the chorus has some beautiful lines and great rhythm to the phrasing. I'm totally with Joshua on this one.

Listened to this twice. One of your best so far in my opinion. Lovely vocal, clear, full of angst. riveting

What a great minute! I love it, it's an entire movie in just a handful of chords and words. True songsmithery.

Yes, very contemporary sound and the beginings of a grteat pop tune. Next challenge is to work it up into a 3 minute hit.

this is so great, I want more verses and minutes of this song!

Looking forward to hearing the entire song - sounds like a smash...

I really like the chorus melody lines here - I'd love to hear them repeated and given the chance to echo and bed in to my ear a bit more.

Copyright Erin Wolf 2021

Week 48 Prompt: Tell Me Everything

Secondary self-imposed challenge: Write a song in 1 minute or less (so I did and tried on a more pop-kind of sound, ope)

i remember years ago
the heavens opened up with snow
you were dancing by my side
we didn't have to hide

but now we're sitting all alone
it's cold and dark quite like stone
all the memories in my mind
some are cruel and some are kind

yet i still need to know
just why you had to go

tell me everything right now
all your fears and all your doubts
tell me why they hold you back
why we had to fade to black

did you lose your hopes and dreams
and all the joy love can bring
can you give me one last sign
or a moment of your time
to tell me everything

Tell Me Everything

All my life I’ve tried to follow the signs,
Searching for diamonds in deep dark mines.
Just when I thought the stars had fallen,
They actually fell into line.
 
Now it seems I’ve known you a million years,
I know you would never cause me tears.
Time slows down when you’re around,
And I belong with you right here.
 
Out of the darkness, into the dawn,
Paradise was waiting all along.
I hope this feeling won’t fade,
The sunlight is brilliant, through the archway.
 
I dream of wandering this world with you,
Crossing oceans so green and blue.
Endless fields and cities young and old,
Going further than we ever knew.
 
Out of the darkness, into the dawn,
Paradise was waiting all along.
I hope this feeling won’t fade,
The sunlight is brilliant, through the archway.
 
When we speak,
I can’t help but smile,
And when you look at me,
My heart lights up for a while.
 
Out of the darkness, into the dawn, 
The sunlight is brilliant, through the archway.
The sunlight is brilliant, through the archway.­

Anoki ReChord's Album

David & Laurie Easterling / Anoki - Through The Archway

Give me a sign

When I was in France with just a guitar I had tentatively planned to get back home and write and record a song with 'as many instruments as i could' instead of the guitar+midi controller approach. This was the one, I guess.


It takes a lot to make me mad
But at ends of days where nothing goes as planned
I know in my heart that this is not my soul

I hate my heart when it gets hot
And even though it takes a lot
To boil up and speak my mind
I curse my curses every time

So here we are all born and breathing
And I just can’t help but dreaming
Of being better, being good enough for you

If I could build us wooden hearts
Fit together like two parts
Of a whole, a perfect space for me to fill your soul

Because all the ones I’ve seen so far
That wouldn’t, couldn’t, shouldn’t start
To love like we know that we should love
Maybe our head had something after all
To let our heart begin to fall
Then look down knowing patient from above

If I could make a wooden boat
Sink or swim, I swear it’d float
And we could put you on the bridge
And sail into the nothingness

If we had our wooden hearts
You’d steer us anywhere to start
I would let you take the wheel
To feel the way we feel that we should feel

Bit I will keep this one all stone and sinew
Blood encased in bones like the one that’s in you
With everything that I’ve done wrong
Because it’s the one that you’ve been counting on

Because it’s the one where I belong


Image credit https://www.flickr.com/photos/tiarescott/39390433

Song a Week 2023 Week 50 - Wooden Hearts

This incredibly exciting track was born from collaboration with my dear friend Kyle Walz. I'm still in the state of awe with the final product. He magically transformed an 8 bar piano progression into this track full of energy and excitement. Thank you, Kyle. I'm looking forward to more collaborations in the near future. I wanna learn as much as I can from you. Particularly, the amazing box you make musical magic with. I wanna learn more of that, jaja! 

C

My Wooden Heart

My Wooden Heart - xthopper x Kyle Walz collaboration

Roses in winter 
(Mark I Anderson)

Like the darkness searching for the morning light
Or a sailor for the sea
To gather roses in winter 
It takes a memory

Like the storm clouds reaching for a brighter day
While the thunder fills the air
The image of a blue sky
Is waiting there

[Chorus]
Love remembers too / though it may fade I know
Like roses in winter / waiting there to grow
There’ll be another season, another reason
Every tender heart will yearn  
Like roses in winter love returns

Like the blank page searching for the author’s pen
Or a poem for a rhyme
The words expressing love
Can be hard to find

And still poetry is gonna fill the page
In time we’re gonna see 
To gather roses in winter 
It takes a memory

[Chorus]
Love remembers you / though it may fade I know
Like roses in winter / waiting there to grow
There’ll be another season, another reason
Every tender heart will yearn  
Like roses in winter love will return

[Bridge]
Your memory holds the picture of the fading rose
Your heart holds the memory of love
The seed holds the mystery to all that grows  
Love holds the mystery of us…

[Chorus]
Love remembers you / though it may fade I know
Like roses in winter / waiting there to grow
There’ll be another season, another reason
Every tender heart will yearn  
Like roses in winter love will return…

Roses in winter

Original lyrics, composition, performed instruments and photography by Evan McDoniels

Be your own vibe... "Have a good time, ALL the time." -Viv Savage

Interstellar journey
Part of me is yearning
Interstitial spaces
Geologic faces
Among us
Light beings dance
Among us
Bioluminescent trance

Interstellar journey
Gyroscopic turning
Orbits make their paces
Hearts like ours will make it
Among us
Light beams dance
Among us 
Parachute pants

Part 2:
Know one
The star
Fly our guitars
Simplify the art
Topaz liquifier
Ultrapanorific 
Transmagrammasonic
Ultra prolific
Simply prehistoric
Post-history
Post-ego
Post-transcendence
Back to luminescence

Part 1 - Interstellar Journey

This is brand new, so I’ll be editing it for awhile.  I’m also playing around with a version in 3/4 time.  Happy I had the time to do this take to share with Song A Week!

Searching for the Moon
Tamora Wilson, New York, NY © December 24, 2023

We had nothing to lose cause we didn’t know what we had
And riding by the lake wasn’t so bad
It’s a good thing we didn’t know what was to come
Cause we would have missed out on all the fun

Well I can’t go back and even if I could, my friends are all gone
It was easier to wish on the stars when nothing could go wrong
It’s too much work to start a campfire
I’m searching for the moon tonight

There was a full moon rising over the lake
It was as orange as a tiger, burning bright
It was larger than any cauldron of witch’s brew
And there was nothing in the way of the view

Well I can’t go back and even if I could, my friends are all gone
It was easier to wish on the stars when nothing could go wrong
It’s too much work to start a campfire
I’m searching for the moon tonight

I look up and see the moon in the sky
It’s stark white and the size of a dime
And I’ve gotta keep moving because there’s just too much to do
Only have a second to take in the view

Well I can’t go back and even if I could, my friends are all gone
It was easier to wish on the stars when nothing could go wrong
It’s too much work to start a campfire
I’m searching for the moon tonight

Searching For The Moon - 1:1:24, 8.04 PM

Like leaves fall back to the forest floor
If the wind doesn’t get in their way
There was nothing left worth leaving
So I promised to stay

Without resolve for a revolution
Eat more, drink more, take up smoking again
Miles between saying and seeing
And intention

Falling leaves
Reach for the dirt
To be covered with snow
And wait for the earth

To leave them alone
And heaven it hurts
To wake dead in spring
We felt it first

Come on don’t tell me that either way
The sun’s gonna rise
Come on don’t tell me that either way
Seeds of renewal only need a little light
Need a little light

With nowhere to go, we go where we’re from
If life doesn’t get in our way
There was nothing left worth leaving
So I promised  to stay

Now holding on to the fall gone
And the foregone winter too
And the forsaken spring means everything
To man who had spoken too soon

Falling leaves
Reach for the dirt
To be covered with snow
And wait for the earth

To leave them alone
And heaven it hurts
To wake dead in spring
We felt it first

Come on don’t tell me that either way
The sun’s gonna rise
Come on don’t tell me that either way
Seeds of renewal only need a little light
Need a little light

Renewal - Song a Week 2024, Week 1

Of the sinner and his sins. Or when you wish you were a different person with different problems. 

******

Forgiven

I looked for love
in places where I could get hurt
I am not ashamed

I lost my faith
in trying to make sense of it
who can now take my complains?

if I quit before the end
will I still be forgiven?

would it somehow make a difference?
would the sun shine if I were him?
would I feel that I can win at last?
would I still be mine if I were him?

I begged for love
and it never took me anywhere
roads of solitude

I was wrong
and I didn’t care enough
please wait in line to complain

if I quit before the end
will I still be forgiven?

would it somehow make a difference?
would the sun shine if I were him?
would I feel that I can win at last?
would I still be mine if I were him?

Song a week 2017

Forgiven

The fifth spirit Of Light and Darkness tells the story of a little pathway over the mountainside whose fertile grounds allowed a beautiful rose to grow. Inadvertently, the pathway couldn't keep up with the flower needs, and so the flower dried up and died. Souls like these might be condemned to grief their way into the hereafter. Unless they let go and move on. Pain is inevitable, suffering, in contrast, is optional. 

*****

Tiempo 

Rayos de sol tocan la tierra
del suelo nace y se marchita una flor
y por la vereda
se escucha triste una voz
que canta una canción

El río que va por la ladera
se llevó todo lo que queda de la flor
y por la vereda
se escucha triste una voz
que canta una canción

Nada voy a hacer con la obsesión
Esa forma tuya de cantar esa canción
Nada voy a hacer si entre tu y yo no queda más tiempo
antes que se oculte el sol

Y del lugar donde ella estuvo
solo ha quedado el daño y la erosión
y en la vereda
siguen los restos de su voz
con esa canción

Y aunque las flores se marchiten
la primavera volverá con su color
y en mi vereda
no se volvió a escuchar su voz
el tiempo se acabó

Of Light and Darkness

Tiempo

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