Kudos Conny, this is a very powerful remix now with Peter's verse providing a context for the almost hard-rock nature of the track, a very strong beginning for our new project.  And Peter's lyric poetry has the effect of a double entendre, the self-examination of a man's past and his sins projected onto all of mankind, but reaching out for a hopeful future in the end.  "Web" will be a magnificent follow up song.

Once again, this collaborative concept is extremely well designed. You all bring the little elements needed to create a great piece.... I won't forget Clara, of course, who is always the essential “cement” vocal in these musical adventures ....

A high honor again my friend to work with you and Peter.  I really love how this came and hope our audience does too:)

In short: for those of us born around the middle of the 20th century, the endless — and sometimes unbelievable — changes in the things around which we organize our lives can easily create confusion and make it hard to recognize the meaning of things (and of our own lives). Everyone has their own way of defending themselves from this kind of solitude. Great performance from all of you, but that’s nothing new. Question: is that David on electric guitar?

as always your talents come together to create a sonic piece of art...kudos on the e guitar parts ...well done my friends..always a pleasurable and thought-provoking listen.

Have you ever seen a shadow of something out of the corner of your eye?
But you can't really see it, touch it or describe what it is. It's just there, annoying.....but also a little scary..
Is it a guilty conscience? A badly disturbed soul. Your own inadequacy? Or your own or someone else's disappointment?......

Or is it all of these feelings and maybe a few more who appears and manifests itself as a ghost to you? A ghost of a sence........which always seems present......no matter what you do....there is always this echo.....and it is with some anguish that we let the difficult moments in our lives pass in our thoughts.........Hmmmm

Magic guitars left & right; David Dunham; @david-dunhamuser589535203
Superb Poetry/Lyrics, Narration; Peter the Poet; soundcloud.com/user-264930040/tracks
Music, mix & production, track image - Seagull: @farout-music-studio
Wonderful voice: Clara Sorace

Ghost of a Sense

Yes, I know you.
I can feel your presence.
I can touch you, smell you.
I see you not by sight of eye
And yet I ken that you are I
That vespered wraith that writhes within
To test my faith, try my sin
Push the bounds to cause offence
A moral, soul thing, ghost of a sense recalls myself, so well defined
Entrenched, walls behind, built so sound of dust that crowned the pity, falling soft amiss,
Deep inside the tears I cry as here I find my self-abyss.

Whispers bringing shadows, filled of secrets therein held,
Memories, morose, piece me still, to wear in time, my wasted face.
And now reside, cast aside, to forge and ever meld,
Of haunting, ringing echoes, that will alone their chime erased.

Ah! But you won't twist me, nor bind me fast, to the sandy doctrines of the misty past,
With its beards and staffs and crinkled testaments.
My future's sprinkled here present with your crass irrelevance and matters not that sat right there,
The blackest chasm in my simpling world so spare,
Where space and time have overspilled the leaking psyche of a crippled mind,
That barely copes, unfulfilled, a crooked, limpid moral health of broken shrines
That hopes to find ....
.......some worthwhile inner self.

Ghost of a sence - David, Peter & Seagull

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And a huge thank you to all of you who have collaborated with me on many of the songs! 😀 ❤️

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