yes indeed...wonderful, thoughtful lyrics perfectly & effectively delivered and accompanied Peter and Seagull.

I loved Peter's original and I also like the additions you have made.  It's a very special message.

I like this song in its essence and message.

wonderful work ,beautyful voice and lyrics :-)

pure beauty, a wonderful collab. Beautiful music, voice and lyrics.

I've already heard it on Peter's page, but it's so fantastic that it deserves to be heard more times.

A beautiful and definitive version of Peter's song, and now one that belongs to both of you by way of gift and lovely, understated additions.  If ever there was a portrait of regret surely it is this.

Beautiful melody and vocal. I take it as a catured moment in your head whenvyou close your eyes snd reflect. Well done

A very good friend gave me this wonderful song as a gift, with a lyric that bites hard in the heart. Thank you very much my dear friend. And as you hear, I couldn't help but let my own thoughts and feelings make some additions. ;)

In a world that rumbles, shakes and spins ever faster, there are unfortunately many fine people who lose their footing, and fall into the darkness created by various mental illnesses.
Give them a thought and an honest smile. Because an honest smile can do wonders for whoever meets it. And best of all, it only takes a few seconds of your day and is completely free, doesn't cost you a penny. ;)

Guitar, Lyrics & Vocals; Peter, which you can find here: https://soundcloud.com/user-264930040/tracks
Other additions; Seagull, which you can find here: https://soundcloud.com/farout-music-studio

Glide Path

Breaking of the snow
Turns my head, to face the west
Where memories play for show
They never rest.
Eyes are clouding down
The more I hide, the less I smile
Saddest clown
For miles and miles.

Portrait of my face
Staring back, from times long past
The blackest space
Where my shadow’s cast.
Conversation stalls
Me and I, in fractured sense,
Childhood’s pall
On emotion’s fence

And where from here?
And when to there?
And what of fear?
And who should care?
And why the tears?
And whose despair?
And how to see,
What once was me?

Water kissing salt
Cry of pain, dissolves my mind
It’s all my fault
Crevasses of the conscious kind
Sharpest form of dark
Biting hard, my ego’s lip
Laser stark
As focus slips

Glide Path - Peter & Seagull

Welcome to my world,  🌍
and a warm thank you to all of you who take your time to listen, comment and like my songs. It is much appreciated !! 😉 🙏🏽

And a huge thank you to all of you who have collaborated with me on many of the songs! 😀 ❤️

Videos are on my YouYube channel  📽

And by the way TERROR, THREAT & WAR NOT ACCEPTED!

Comments

Dave Orestes 1

David Dunham

Midisound

oddrun eikli

Little Man

jigs trippin

Karin-Maria Brunner

Lammbone

Debra Buesking

Ed Cunningham