oh and superb lyrics did I forget to say that...

You are natural songwriter, I am very impressed with the lyrics on this one! My favorite line - I see you're playing your favorite song It's always on repeat! <3

............. its very difrend..... deep......hmmmm...............: o)))))))))

Really quite beautiful--there's something about your breath and the way you deliver these lines that feels almost withheld, in a lovely and restrained way; like a secret...or like an effort not to overflow.

catching opening. got me right from now on

I tip my hat off to you, Sir! I am impressed by your multitalent skills!

Here's a demo of "Private, I" from the upcoming album "Honne and Tatemae". This is only a demo of the song. I hope to re-record it again soon. I just wanted to get some new music up on the page.

I understand that the words are probably quite indecipherable to people and i also have a bad habit of mumbling. So here are the lyrics:

PRIVATE, I

I asked if you were crying
And you said "It's just the rain."
But it's easy to tell the difference between water and your pain.
Plasters laced in salt are littered across the hall
And the barely open door through which you always fall.

You've left the heating on
To warm up your feet
I see you're playing your favourite song
It's always on repeat.
That one you love about running away.
But you care too much not to stay.

And you only look your best for love and death.
And you stay in rags for the rest.
Yeah, you always look your best for love and death.
But you stay in rags for the rest.

Private, I

Drifting in the audio void.  Somewhere between the chaos and the calm.
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Production (Fragile X) 
Label Owner (soundcloud.com/bricolage-g5)
Sleep Research as (soundcloud.com/leit-motif-sleeper)
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Music released on Bricolage, Intellitronic Bubble, Waxing Crescent, Móatún 7, noci miste, Cue Dot, Neo Ouija, Soundtracking The Void, Disintegration State, See Blue Audio, Subplant, Triplicate Records, Tribal Pulse, Light At The End, Unstrung, Gorecki Productions, Neotantra, Soundscape Versions, BFW Recordings and Bath Dub.
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