Nice to hear you are trying to go for stage. Regarding theme and composiiton, it feel bit off. I mean the parts when different instrument plays are not connected very well. It have almost random feel.

Mix need more work. It feels little empty. Overall atmoshpere is strange. Not sure how to feel about the mood. It is sound like confusion. Maybe that is what you are aiming for.

I was ready to discount this track on the waveform itself, but I really like what you're trying to do.  It's an up close, in your face sort of warmth.  The concept really shines through I think.

Great sound selection, and it sounds so nice and free with itself.

It's funny, I want "more" but I don't even know what that would mean for this track. Great job.

levels were a bit all over the place; take care when you are doing mixing along the way or after that you try to get the levels somewhat balanced

This melody is pretty kooky, I like the lead sound

If you compare this busy section in the middle of the track, it's way quieter than the sounds at the start.

The drum sounds are being let down by the mix a bit, the hat sounds more prominent than the kick and snare to me. Also the drum pattern is getting repeated quite frequently.

Comments

Ranoka

Ranoka

Ranoka

z.prime

z.prime

functionform

functionform

functionform

TrojakEW

TrojakEW