Filk written for an assignment in a Song Writing Class on Coursera. Incomplete song. Two verses, rough draft. 

Pon Farr

My Peer Assignment for SongWriting on Coursera.org lesson 5
Camelia Rosa from São Paulo is a friend I may have lost and this is the song about what has and is happening  between us.
I sang with a loop provide by the instructor. This needs it's own tune, and I need a lot of practice singing it. So this is not the final recording. I have to record it one more time for the class. 

CameliaRosaMyForeverFriendFromSão Paulo

I have to write a song for an online Song writing class. I have not finalized the song and there is no tune for it, so I sang it to a loop. Badly, i know. It is a step in the process. 

CameliaRosaMyForeverFriendhobowind

Bad singing to a Blues loop provided by my teacher. The idea is for my peers to give me advice on how to improve the Front load or Back load of the song to give stability or unstability to the lyrics, as appropriate. In other words make the sad words sound sad the happy words happy, etc. 

Gandolf-fairlady