New song to listen to and look into my field. Beautiful, just beautiful!

When you hit that high note, it’s too squeaky. Maybe that’s not the right description but you’re making too big a deal out of it. I would approach that part of your song with more subtlety. Next, the rhythm is nice and kind of cute and it’s probably appropriate for this kind of song but after a while, it just was like I felt like I was on the merry-go-round! And harmonically around the two minute mark, you finally put in a little bit of cord change with that downward descending part, but the rhythm was still the same as the rest of the song. Song like this cries out for a C-section or some kind of event where you can Change keys, change points of view, but most of all change the rhythm and the groove.

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