A short meaningful track which I intend on adding to a solo EP and, later on, to my bands setlist. Please share and leave constructive criticism. 

This was recorded with HD Headphones on the Soundtrap recording app using my acoustic guitar as well as my voice.


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Your Terrace - "Subsequent"

Lyrics
You'll find me confined and alibis flow from my every breath
I'm the one whose kept you here
It seems your pillow is half empty but I'll keep it that way
It tells me that I need less assistance but consequently I've wasted all my time
Please don't ask me if you're expecting the truth
It'll hurt much less through abandonment 
oh,oh,oh,oh
Please don't ever leave here
Undergoing your undoing, thereby mutilated from the concept
Deducted from your last words and here I am on standby
I wont be the one you'll fall on
Though I'm a sucker for brown eyes

Summoning Charms (demo)

Tips and Opinions pls as Im not finished with this song

Greys0n